Wednesday, June 23, 2010

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Today's post is about a classmate's blog... so i have decided to write about the blog that i've read it the most, and that is the blog of Natalia Ortiz, called Lost in Transaltion

It's actually a very simple blog. white background, simple font, no gadgets
At the moments has 9 post and 20 comments total, and my personal favorite is the one from the 22 of may, when she speaks about "If you want to study architecture, please remains this..." there, in very simple words it define what it takes to study our career, and she does so as a warning for all the people out there who actualy thinking to choose it, in my case, i kind of knew a little bit about it, but honestly... i have never imagine that it would be THAT much
When i star to think about what aspects of english shoud she focus on more, i can't really tell, even though i remember seen a few grammar mistakes or... just things that sound weird, there was nothing like... specially wrong that she needs to focus on. the only thing that comes to my mind for improving her blog is to try to make comments a little bit more longer, i know, we all want to finish quick and everything, but she has enough english for doing it better. and finally even though my blog is not a good example, you should try to add somthing to your blog, to make it nicer on his "appearance", white is ok.. but is that it? xD

1 comment:

  1. i was about to be a troll and shout jus FIRST!!! but, nah :D

    and that's all, it's late and i wanna go home, so, maybe i'll write a better replie someday

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